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暑假写的英语作文2篇,(中考水平以上)OurclassisgoingonasightseeingonSaturday,March16thStudentsareexpectedtoleaveat8:00inthemorningonourschoolbusandarriveatEastLakePark3hourslater.Amountain-climbingcontest
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暑假写的英语作文2篇,(中考水平以上)

OurclassisgoingonasightseeingonSaturday,March16thStudentsareexpectedtoleaveat8:00inthemorningonourschoolbusandarriveatEastLakePark3hourslater.Amountain-climbingcontestandaboat-rowingracewillbeorganizedthen.Studentswillhaveapicnicatthirteen.Intheafternoon,everyonecanwalkaroundthelake,visittheSeaWorldandtakephotos.Ourschoolbusisgoingtoleavethereat5:30p.m.

Class4,Grade2

假如你是Tom,你已经参加了本次游览活动,请你参照阅读材料的相关信息,以Tom的名义写一篇名为”AnUnforgettable(难忘的)Sightseeing”的文章(80词左右)

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我的文章:That’sanunforgettabledayfrombeginning!Wesangandchattedhappilyonthebus,and3hourspassedquickly.Themountain-climbingcontestandboatrowingracewerebothveryexciting!OurgroupmateSarahwasinjuredinthemountain-climbingcontestbutshewentonclimbing.Iadmiredher!Finallyourgroupgotasecondprize,wewereallveryhappy.Weatesandwichesforpicnic,Helenmadesandwicheswellandshebroughtmuchtosharewithus.Itookmanyphotosoftheswansinthelakewhenwewerewalkingaroundthelake.Welefttherewithnicememoriesat5:30p.m.(这篇文章差不多100词了请帮我精简一下…另外请在改动的地方做上记号

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1.电影院电影通告:EnjoyYourFavoritesinStarCinema

November

Monday-Thursday

TheLionKing,Shrek(I):11:00;13:00;15:00;19:00

Friday-Sunday

Voldemort:13:00;15:00

TheLionKing,Shrek(I):13:00;19:00

Ticketsmustbebookedanytimeupto30minutesbeforethefilmstarts.Ticketholdersaregivenseatnumbers.

Drinksareprovided.

Ticketprice:Adults:$18;Childrenunder6:$8;Studentsunder16:$12

Smokingisnotallowedanywhereinthecinema.Mobilephonesmustbeturnedoff.

请参照阅读材料中的相关信息,以Jean的名义写一张留言条,告诉你的好朋友Tom星期天晚上TheLionKing的电影票买好了,约他18:40在戏院门口等.并简单告诉他看电影的注意事项(80词)

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我的文章:DearTom,

郎丛妍回答:
  我是一名英语专业的应届毕业生,我觉得你的文章写得还可以,注意一下每句之间的连接词就好.   第一篇   That’sreallyanunforgettabledayinmymind!Itseemsthat3hourspassedsoquicklyaswesangandchattedhappilyonthebus.Andthemountain-climbingcontestandboatrowingraceweresoexcitingthatwewereallexcitedaboutit!AlthoughoneofourgroupmatesSarahwasinjuredinthemountain-climbingcontest,shestillwentonclimbing.Ireallyadmiredher!Finallyourgroupgotasecondprize,wewereallontopoftheworld.DuringthepicnicweatesandwicheswhichweremadeandbroughtbyHelen.What'smorewhenwewerewalkingaroundthelakeItookmanyphotosoftheswansinthelake.Havingenjoyedourselveswelefttherewithabeautifulmemoryat5:30.
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